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help me refocus this PS. critiques/restart advice welcome!

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 3:37 pm
by calidancer2
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Re: help me refocus this PS. critiques/restart advice welcome!

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:11 pm
by CorkBoard
I think you should try to stick with your original topic. I don't like this one as much as the other. It seems way too expansive. The most interesting part you mention is your time in Costa Rica, which is probably the most interesting part of this PS.

Re: help me refocus this PS. critiques/restart advice welcome!

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:54 pm
by calidancer2
CorkBoard wrote:I think you should try to stick with your original topic. I don't like this one as much as the other. It seems way too expansive. The most interesting part you mention is your time in Costa Rica, which is probably the most interesting part of this PS.

Can't thank you enough for all your help Corkboard! Tossing this one and will use your edits. Just want to make sure it's bulletproof when all is said and done.