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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2012 4:45 pm
by Anonymous User
no insight
Re: A rough draft!! critique please?
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:27 pm
by CanadianWolf
This is not a good law school PS because it offers no insights into you or your development. This is a simple "I did this, I did that" piece which should be in your resume, not in your law school personal statement.
Re: A rough draft!! critique please?
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:29 pm
by jhertirac
CanadianWolf wrote:This is not a good law school PS because it offers no insights into you or your development. This is a simple "I did this, I did that" piece which should be in your resume, not in your law school personal statement.
Re: A rough draft!! critique please?
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:54 pm
by ChikaBoom
The above is true. You start to give us a bit of a picture as to the type of person you are, but then you continue to give the run down of your resume. I'd pick either the stepping or the RA thing if you're committed to these topics and then further develop them by picking out a specific event or instance that gives us more of an idea about your character and actions.
But, cool deal on the stepping thing. It looks interesting.