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Rough First Draft Please Please PLEASE critique

Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2012 9:08 pm
by Anonymous User
Scrapped.

Re: Rough First Draft Please Please PLEASE critique

Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2012 10:09 pm
by Anonymous User
I'm already working on the draft. I would really like some advice on the tone and topic. Any feedback is appreciated.

Re: Rough First Draft Please Please PLEASE critique

Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2012 10:52 pm
by fruitoftheloom
Good luck!!