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Come bash this PI PS--is it too political? (Happy to trade)
Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2012 3:16 am
by Anonymous User
Thanks to everyone who commented or sent me comments, you were helpful
. I'm deleting it now to keep it from adcomms. Anyone else curious to see my PS or critique it, just send a PM to Cicero76 (no need for anonymity anymore haha).
Re: Come bash this PI PS--is it too political? (Happy to trade)
Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 10:56 am
by mmbt123
I thought it was very good -- good coherent narrative and well written.
Re: Come bash this PI PS--is it too political? (Happy to trade)
Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 7:06 pm
by fruitoftheloom
Good, just make sure you capitalize senator when it's Senator XXX
Re: Come bash this PI PS--is it too political? (Happy to trade)
Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 8:15 pm
by WhiskeynCoke
Don't change a thing. It works, is interesting, and will suit your audience quite well. Even though you get a bit political, I think you handle it well and stick to the issue without polarizing the audience. Pretty much everyone can agree theres a lot wrong with healthcare. Most academics lean liberal anyway, so you're good.
Great PS