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Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:00 pm
by Anonymous User
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Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:02 pm
by CanadianWolf
At first glance, it appears to be a bit too short.
Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:04 pm
by CanadianWolf
To be blunt, I believe that most, maybe all, US law schools require one's PS to be written in English.
If you are a thesaurus salesman, this is an excellent piece, but if you want to be a practicing lawyer, then you need to be able to communicate your thoughts in a more clear fashion.
Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:07 pm
by iqbalicarus
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Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:10 pm
by Anonymous User
CanadianWolf wrote:To be blunt, I believe that most, maybe all, US law schools require one's PS to be written in English.
If you are a thesaurus salesman, this is an excellent piece, but if you want to be a practicing lawyer, then you need to be able to communicate your thoughts in a more clear fashion.
That wasn't very blunt.
Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:12 pm
by CanadianWolf
Okay. Then: To be tactful, ....