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I have a really rough version of a personal statement. If anyone would care to read it and give me some feedback respond to this thread / shoot me a PM. Wouldn't mind taking a look at your PS either if you were looking for feedback.

I am basically looking for feedback about the topic choice and overall content.

Appreciate all of those who have PMd a swap, loving the feedback. Offer is still open if anyone would like to swap.