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be gentle

Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 10:48 pm
by florida1949
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Re: be gentle

Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2012 8:25 pm
by florida1949
anyone? ...please haha

Re: be gentle

Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2012 9:30 pm
by ChikaBoom
I actually liked it. It flows and you sound like a decent person. I didn't check closely for grammar, but appears well written. Good luck!