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PS Draft: It has action, drama, suspense!
Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 4:01 am
by digifly
* Withdrawn
Re: PS Draft: It has action, drama, suspense!
Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 1:17 pm
by digifly
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Re: PS Draft: It has action, drama, suspense!
Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 1:47 pm
by CanadianWolf
Too wordy. Try to write in a more succinct fashion. At best, this should be viewed as a rough first draft.
P.S. False advertising ? Couldn't find the action, drama or suspense.

Re: PS Draft: It has action, drama, suspense!
Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 1:54 pm
by NightmanCometh
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Re: PS Draft: It has action, drama, suspense!
Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 3:12 pm
by digifly
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