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Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft
Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:54 pm
by hellohi
edited
Re: Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft
Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:08 pm
by FattyMcFatFat
I won't comment on grammar or anything like that, but I really like the point/concept of the fourth paragraph.
Re: Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft
Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:11 pm
by Richie Tenenbaum
I really enjoyed the content. I'll let others offer specific grammar suggestions/fixes.
Re: Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 10:41 pm
by hellohi
Thanks for the positive feedback guys, I'm glad you like the content.
Does anyone have any grammar tips?