I'm also submitting a 350-word addendum and 4th LOR, so I'm trying to keep this as short as possible. I'm worried if I've omitted too much details in the process - or should I sieve it further? Polishing is definitely needed but at this stage of writing I'm more concerned with the overall direction and structure.
Any advice/critique/suggestion is appreciated. Thank you in advance!
Rough DS: Critique/Advice needed! Forum
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Ramsey
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Rough DS: Critique/Advice needed!
Last edited by Ramsey on Tue Sep 11, 2012 5:29 am, edited 2 times in total.
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nowayout
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Re: Rough DS: Critique/Advice needed!
Interesting material. Long sentences and loose structure.
Rewrite.
Rewrite.
