revised PS, be a boss and tell me how it is
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 10:34 am
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I read your original as well. This is a million times better
There are some strange parts though - he stands up for his country because he's... Built well? Im sure his motivations were more than just a strong arm and quick mind. Theres some strange stuff like that, but all in all this is a mich better ps than the original. I love the intro