Should I write a DS?
Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 7:21 pm
I am trying to decide whether to include a DS or just incorporate the subject of the DS in my PS.
The DS will talk about some unique and difficult circumstances I lived under as a child and the person I am today as a result of it. I only want to highlight the diversity aspect insofar as the explicit details suggest, however. In other words, I don't want to say "___ makes me diverse because..." I want to highlight how I put a positive spin on the adverse circumstances and became a better person because of it.
My fear is that this sounds too much like a PS. However, I want to leave the PS for explaining my interest in law.
Of course I could just write the DS to explain how weird my upbringing was and fall a little short on the analysis and lasting effects of it. However, I am then running the risk of appearing slightly unstable as a result of my upbringing. Not to mention, I am also left with the same problem of a somewhat bland PS.
So, should I somehow incorporate the DS into my PS? It would probably make for a better PS but it would also make the PS less streamlined and would not let me discuss both experiences in the detail that I would like.
Thoughts?
The DS will talk about some unique and difficult circumstances I lived under as a child and the person I am today as a result of it. I only want to highlight the diversity aspect insofar as the explicit details suggest, however. In other words, I don't want to say "___ makes me diverse because..." I want to highlight how I put a positive spin on the adverse circumstances and became a better person because of it.
My fear is that this sounds too much like a PS. However, I want to leave the PS for explaining my interest in law.
Of course I could just write the DS to explain how weird my upbringing was and fall a little short on the analysis and lasting effects of it. However, I am then running the risk of appearing slightly unstable as a result of my upbringing. Not to mention, I am also left with the same problem of a somewhat bland PS.
So, should I somehow incorporate the DS into my PS? It would probably make for a better PS but it would also make the PS less streamlined and would not let me discuss both experiences in the detail that I would like.
Thoughts?