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need some addenda help!! dont know if this is sufficient.

Post by mehereuthere101787 » Tue Feb 28, 2012 11:41 pm

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Re: need some addenda help!! dont know if this is sufficient.

Post by rinkrat19 » Tue Feb 28, 2012 11:44 pm

mehereuthere101787 wrote:In June of 2005, when I was 16 years old, I was charged with petty theft. I returned the item to the police station with my mother and went to court. I had to pay paid a fine, take took a class, and completed 40 hours of community service. I completed my community service at XXXX. The case was expunged.

In the Fall of 2006, during my freshman year in college, I was arrested for being drunk in public. The case was dismissed and I did not have to appear in court. The former was of particular disappointment to myself and my family, but both occurrences were lapses in better judgment and I have not been in any trouble since.
Put the two incidents in separate paragraphs. Leave out the "lapses in better judgement" drama bit.

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Post by mehereuthere101787 » Tue Feb 28, 2012 11:46 pm

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