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anyone want to see a really short DS?

Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 1:34 am
by swtlilsoni
I just have a short DS I'm working on, was wondering if anyone could take a look just so I know I'm on the right track. It's less than a page double spaced.

Re: anyone want to see a really short DS?

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:52 pm
by jecthoma
I'll critique it for you. pm it to me.