Very rough draft of personal statement
Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:30 pm
Most little girls grow up playing with barbies or dollhouses. It was my idea of fun to pretend that I was a lawyer filling out paperwork at my desk. My niece Amanda, who is a year older than me, wasn’t so fond of that game. Rather than playing dress-up or pretending I was a princess, I preferred to have my nose stuck in a book. It didn’t matter if I was at the mall with my mom, in the shower or supposed to be in bed fast asleep. I was constantly reading. Amanda would beg my mom not to take me to the library for anymore books so that I would play with her instead. The highlight of my summers as a child was the summer reading program at the local library. They would award a prize to the child who read the most books, which seemed like a piece of cake because that is what I liked to do best anyways.
I started taking dance classes when I was two years old and continued until the age of 12 when I got to junior high school. Once in junior high I started doing colorguard, winterguard, soccer and lacrosse. I tried almost everything at least once including basketball, volleyball and cheerleading. I participated in colorguard and winterguard for over 6 years which was probably the most rewarding experience of my life. It teaches you discipline, dedication and motivation as well as commitment. All of the practices were mandatory and would last anywhere from 4-8 hours. Every weekend we had competitions where all of your hard work would come to fruition. We travelled all over the east coast to NYC, Philadelphia, Dayton Ohio, Washington DC and so many more places. That was where my love of traveling came from as well as my ability to work well with others.
When I started taking Italian in school I fell in love. I loved everything about the language and the ability to communicate in a way that I wasn’t used to. It came so naturally to me that I felt I had always known how to speak it. My mom and I had an italian exchange student stay with us for two weeks and I loved showing her around and learning what her life was like in Italy. I wanted to know all about how it differed from life in the states and what their culture was like. When I had the opportunity to go stay with her and her family in Italy at the age of 16, I was elated. I flew by myself with three different transferring flights, almost missed my connecting flight in France which I was unfamiliar with and my luggage was lost but as soon as I stepped foot in Rome, I knew that it was going to be the most amazing experience of my life to date. I stayed in a little town called Pescara. I was eager to learn everything that I could. I tried to speak in Italian more than I spoke in English and although I was obviously American because I didn’t have a fluid tongue I was able to communicate effectively. From this experience I learned that I wanted to continue to step outside of my comfort zone and continue to learn how to see things from a different perspective.
When I transferred to St John’s University I was in pursuit of those very things. I had grown up in a small town where many people have never travelled, everyone went to school together and very few people are willing to look at things in a different way. St Johns is a very diverse school and I was able to meet people from all different walks of life. I worked at a cafe near Columbia University which also allowed me to encounter many fascinating people. My favorite customers were both professors at the University. When they travelled all around Europe I received a post card from them from Venice. At that point in my life I never thought I would be lucky enough to have an adventure such as theirs. I joined a sorority my first semester at school in order to become more involved in campus life and feel like I was a part of something. In the same semester I discovered that my father had stage 4 lung cancer which at first was hard to cope with. Once the initial shock was over the same thing that had caused me to question life was pushing me forward. I realized that I wanted to strive for greatness and pursue my dreams. I hand’t necessarily been raised to believe that you can do anything you set your mind to but that was the mindset I adopted.
I would always get emails from school about the different opportunities you could partake in and one day I received an email telling about a Habitat for Humanity trip that was being put together for a bunch of schools in the area. I immediately told my mother about the trip and somehow was able to convince her that rather than taking a vacation for fun I wanted to take a trip to help people. Granted working on a house when your not a skilled construction worker doesn’t allow you to help much but in the grander scheme of things your devoting your time whether how big or small the contribution. I enjoyed knowing that I was helping to provide a home for a family who at the time didn’t have one regardless of whether or not it was my hands that actually gave them that home.
When I graduated from St John’s it made the most sense that I move back home to Rochester. I spent my time working as a manager at a restaurant trying to make as much money as I could to pay off my bills and my debt. I made that my sole purpose in life so that I could be debt free as I moved on to the next step in my life. When I finally paid off my bills I planned a month long European adventure. Just before my trip I was laid off. I had enough money for my trip so I didn’t let it bother me or change my plans. I saw seven different countries and 11 different cities in the course of 35 days. It was one of my dreams finally come true. I spent about two weeks in Italy, visiting four different cities. I found that when I was there my love for communicating came right back to me. My travel mate had no knowledge of Italian and a lot of times the only way we would be able to figure out what train to take or where to do laundry or even how to check into a hotel was through my knowledge of the language. It gave me a great sense of accomplishment.
When I returned from Europe I decided to start my own business rather returning to the restaurant business where I had resided since I was fourteen years old when I got my first job at the local burger joint. While figuring out how to get my business off the ground I have been tutoring a deaf girl named Priscilla in english. She has taught me to realize how lucky I am to read, write and communicate. She has a very hard time with communication because although she has cochlear implants, reading and writing and even speaking do not come easy to her. She has a hard time getting her point across and often times can’t find the right words or the grammatically correct way to speak or write her thoughts. We have been working on building up her confidence and after taking time off from school she now thinks she is up for the challenge again.
There has not been one single life altering event that has brought me to where I am today, rather a culmination of things that have caused me to look at the world in a different way and allow me to see things from multiple perspectives. Through my life I have kept the joy of reading with me. I find great pleasure in helping others and want to continue to do so. I hope to take these qualities with me on my journey to becoming a lawyer.
I started taking dance classes when I was two years old and continued until the age of 12 when I got to junior high school. Once in junior high I started doing colorguard, winterguard, soccer and lacrosse. I tried almost everything at least once including basketball, volleyball and cheerleading. I participated in colorguard and winterguard for over 6 years which was probably the most rewarding experience of my life. It teaches you discipline, dedication and motivation as well as commitment. All of the practices were mandatory and would last anywhere from 4-8 hours. Every weekend we had competitions where all of your hard work would come to fruition. We travelled all over the east coast to NYC, Philadelphia, Dayton Ohio, Washington DC and so many more places. That was where my love of traveling came from as well as my ability to work well with others.
When I started taking Italian in school I fell in love. I loved everything about the language and the ability to communicate in a way that I wasn’t used to. It came so naturally to me that I felt I had always known how to speak it. My mom and I had an italian exchange student stay with us for two weeks and I loved showing her around and learning what her life was like in Italy. I wanted to know all about how it differed from life in the states and what their culture was like. When I had the opportunity to go stay with her and her family in Italy at the age of 16, I was elated. I flew by myself with three different transferring flights, almost missed my connecting flight in France which I was unfamiliar with and my luggage was lost but as soon as I stepped foot in Rome, I knew that it was going to be the most amazing experience of my life to date. I stayed in a little town called Pescara. I was eager to learn everything that I could. I tried to speak in Italian more than I spoke in English and although I was obviously American because I didn’t have a fluid tongue I was able to communicate effectively. From this experience I learned that I wanted to continue to step outside of my comfort zone and continue to learn how to see things from a different perspective.
When I transferred to St John’s University I was in pursuit of those very things. I had grown up in a small town where many people have never travelled, everyone went to school together and very few people are willing to look at things in a different way. St Johns is a very diverse school and I was able to meet people from all different walks of life. I worked at a cafe near Columbia University which also allowed me to encounter many fascinating people. My favorite customers were both professors at the University. When they travelled all around Europe I received a post card from them from Venice. At that point in my life I never thought I would be lucky enough to have an adventure such as theirs. I joined a sorority my first semester at school in order to become more involved in campus life and feel like I was a part of something. In the same semester I discovered that my father had stage 4 lung cancer which at first was hard to cope with. Once the initial shock was over the same thing that had caused me to question life was pushing me forward. I realized that I wanted to strive for greatness and pursue my dreams. I hand’t necessarily been raised to believe that you can do anything you set your mind to but that was the mindset I adopted.
I would always get emails from school about the different opportunities you could partake in and one day I received an email telling about a Habitat for Humanity trip that was being put together for a bunch of schools in the area. I immediately told my mother about the trip and somehow was able to convince her that rather than taking a vacation for fun I wanted to take a trip to help people. Granted working on a house when your not a skilled construction worker doesn’t allow you to help much but in the grander scheme of things your devoting your time whether how big or small the contribution. I enjoyed knowing that I was helping to provide a home for a family who at the time didn’t have one regardless of whether or not it was my hands that actually gave them that home.
When I graduated from St John’s it made the most sense that I move back home to Rochester. I spent my time working as a manager at a restaurant trying to make as much money as I could to pay off my bills and my debt. I made that my sole purpose in life so that I could be debt free as I moved on to the next step in my life. When I finally paid off my bills I planned a month long European adventure. Just before my trip I was laid off. I had enough money for my trip so I didn’t let it bother me or change my plans. I saw seven different countries and 11 different cities in the course of 35 days. It was one of my dreams finally come true. I spent about two weeks in Italy, visiting four different cities. I found that when I was there my love for communicating came right back to me. My travel mate had no knowledge of Italian and a lot of times the only way we would be able to figure out what train to take or where to do laundry or even how to check into a hotel was through my knowledge of the language. It gave me a great sense of accomplishment.
When I returned from Europe I decided to start my own business rather returning to the restaurant business where I had resided since I was fourteen years old when I got my first job at the local burger joint. While figuring out how to get my business off the ground I have been tutoring a deaf girl named Priscilla in english. She has taught me to realize how lucky I am to read, write and communicate. She has a very hard time with communication because although she has cochlear implants, reading and writing and even speaking do not come easy to her. She has a hard time getting her point across and often times can’t find the right words or the grammatically correct way to speak or write her thoughts. We have been working on building up her confidence and after taking time off from school she now thinks she is up for the challenge again.
There has not been one single life altering event that has brought me to where I am today, rather a culmination of things that have caused me to look at the world in a different way and allow me to see things from multiple perspectives. Through my life I have kept the joy of reading with me. I find great pleasure in helping others and want to continue to do so. I hope to take these qualities with me on my journey to becoming a lawyer.