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Final Draft
Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2012 11:19 am
by Sesi329
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Re: FINAL Draft Let me know if theirs anything i can correct plz
Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2012 1:21 pm
by JasonR
It's still too long. You reduced it to 1,104 words from 1,274, but it really shouldn't be longer than ~850 words, and 750-800 would be better. I just skimmed it very quickly, but even then I noticed several typos, word omissions, etc.
Re: FINAL Draft Let me know if theirs anything i can correct plz
Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:59 pm
by CanadianWolf
OP: Correct your thread title & you may get more readers.