Please review my personal statement
Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 2:39 pm
I took it down and would probably have to write something else.
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This entire paragraph is the worst of the worst of your PS. Nobody cares you two were college sweethearts and is inappropriate to bring it up in this context. This paragraph talks more about your wife more than you.My wife and I were college sweethearts and we met when we were both playing basketball for our College. We have never been separated for more than few weeks ever since. I quit my first job when she went to graduate school for her master degree in biochemistry in Shanghai and then quit my second job when she came to U.S. for her PhD study at University of Wisconsin-Madison all because I wanted her to be successful and we wanted to be together. After I graduated from Edgewood College (in Madison) with my MBA degree in accounting and an overall GPA of 3.9 when she was a PhD student at UW, I got my first full-time job as the controller of a company in Milwaukee and passed all my CPA exams there. Although I really liked the job and it offered me great potential, but eventually I resigned, took a salary cut, and found my last job as a treasury analyst for a manufacturing company in Madison because my wife changed her career and was getting her MBA at UW in Madison instead of finding a job in Milwaukee as we originally planned. Finally, she found her dream job in Minneapolis after she graduated from UW. At the mean time, I was able to persuade my employer to work remotely from home so I could take care of our new born baby and be with my family all the time.
I have been to the Law School Library many time and studied there. I really liked the atmosphere there and was motivated by students working so hard
We are also deeply involved in the community and have established strong friendships here.
I mean seriously, be more professional.Our daughter is in her toddler age now and she needs my love just as I need hers everyday.