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Please critique my PS draft

Post by sf88 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 5:51 pm

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Re: Please critique my PS draft

Post by JasonR » Wed Dec 21, 2011 6:56 pm

I would eliminate the postmodern jargon/terminology in the third-to-last paragraph. It's fine in humanities classes, but it doesn't wear well outside of them.
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Re: Please critique my PS draft

Post by sf88 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:42 pm

Thanks for the feedback. I agree with you and I'll change that for my next draft.

I'd love additional input and I'm certainly open to reading drafts. Please keep it coming!
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