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Please read and review my partially completed statement...

Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2011 11:21 am
by YoungProfessional
Can you give me rough critique for my personal statement? I need your opinion on content more then grammar and spelling (unless of course if you can't understand the sentences at all). It is not completed (still have to tie in my future plans and conclusion)

I just want to know your feelings when you read it and what does it tell you about me. Thanks in advance for your help. :D
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forget it

Re: Please read and review my partially completed statement...

Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2011 3:34 pm
by YoungProfessional
Bump!