Personal Statement draft -- could use some help
Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:26 pm
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I like it a lot. It speaks about you, why you are unique, and how you have overcome struggles in your life and how that has caused you to grow. A bit of advice:
- Take out the bit about winning battles against your brother, and the other battles for that matter. I would start with: I have won many battles, but the most important battle in my life...
- I want to advocate for those who cannot do so for themselves
If you are going to mention the law school, make it sound more sincere than a simple "shout-out" to get the schools name in.