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Second draft, can't be worse.
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 3:19 am
by ProBoyMagic
tyty
Re: Second draft, can't be worse.
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:41 pm
by kublaikahn
You witnessed travesties on your one-two hour visit to muni court? But yeah, 75% of criminal defendants are indigent. You need a more interesting story to tell if you want to discuss this.
Re: Second draft, can't be worse.
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:57 pm
by masked kavana
"I wanted to be a shepherd to those who were lost and felt marginalized by legal society"
For some reason this comes across as kind of condescending. Perhaps find a lighter word than sheperd?