Anyone willing to critique a very personal/emotional PS?
Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:50 pm
Hi,
I wrote a rough draft of a personal statement that contains details of a very emotional/intimate event for me.
For that reason, I am a little reluctant to post the full PS on the forum for everyone to see.
From what I've seen, TLSers seem to give very helpful and straightforward feedback.
If anyone is willing to take a look at my rough draft, please let me know.
I welcome any kind of critique on the content, wordings, grammar, etc.
Thank you so much in advance.
I wrote a rough draft of a personal statement that contains details of a very emotional/intimate event for me.
For that reason, I am a little reluctant to post the full PS on the forum for everyone to see.
From what I've seen, TLSers seem to give very helpful and straightforward feedback.
If anyone is willing to take a look at my rough draft, please let me know.
I welcome any kind of critique on the content, wordings, grammar, etc.
Thank you so much in advance.