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PS Critique- Please help!

Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 2:57 pm
by gravityrides0
I've swapped my PS with a couple of people already, and I've had to add a bit to it to explain things that were unclear. As a result, my PS is a few sentences over two pages. If anyone can help critique and help me choose what to omit to shorten it, I would greatly appreciate it! I can help you with yours too. PM me :)