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Possibly take a look at my PS?

Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 4:55 am
by FryBreadPower
Sort of in the middle draft stages. Definitely have the skeleton/story that i want to use but need to clean up sentence structure to make each sentence more effective. Would love to have anyone take a look at it; PM me if you are interested!

Re: Possibly take a look at my PS?

Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:33 am
by FryBreadPower
FryBreadPower wrote:Sort of in the middle draft stages. Definitely have the skeleton/story that i want to use but need to clean up sentence structure to make each sentence more effective. Would love to have anyone take a look at it; PM me if you are interested!
Bump. Didn't mention it but I am happy to swap statements and return the favor for anyone who would have a few minutes to help me out!