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Thanks for your help.

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Thanks kublaikahn. Anyone else have any advice?

"effect change", not "affect change" The first means to bring about change, while the second means to have an impact on change already brought about.

The first opening paragraph is better, in my opinion.

CONSIDER: "My experiences have helped me to achieve clarity through the hardships that accompany adversity."

Thanks, CW. Would you recommend any more changes? Do you think it's pretty much final draft ready?

After one read, my impression is that this is a final draft.

Thanks, sometimes reaffirmation is all one needs.