Mentor Essay- Can it ever work?
Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 5:00 pm
I've been working on my personal statement and I'm a little concerned about my topic.
Basically, I'm writing about the conversations I had with one of my mentors and the goal is to show how I've reflected on those ideas in other areas of my life. However, my mentor is just an incredibly interesting person and really makes for an engaging read, and I'm worried my descriptions of him are outshining the parts of the essay that are actually about me.
Do you think that I can mitigate this? Can a PS that stems from an experience with and incredibly interesting person ever work?
Basically, I'm writing about the conversations I had with one of my mentors and the goal is to show how I've reflected on those ideas in other areas of my life. However, my mentor is just an incredibly interesting person and really makes for an engaging read, and I'm worried my descriptions of him are outshining the parts of the essay that are actually about me.
Do you think that I can mitigate this? Can a PS that stems from an experience with and incredibly interesting person ever work?