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DS very rough draft - please critique

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 1:48 am

by salsahips

Removed... let me know if you are willing to revise and I'll PM. Thanks.

Re: DS very rough draft - please critique

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:17 am

by CanadianWolf

The first sentence of your final paragraph makes an important point that is likely to resonate with many readers.

Re: DS very rough draft - please critique

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:19 am

by salsahips

Thanks.