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I am looking for some tips on the first part of my PS and the general direction I'm taking it. Though I'm a WASP-y female, I have a non-traditional family and am writing about the prejudices I faced because of it as a child. I am afraid I'm going in the wrong direction with it.

If you are willing to read it (it's just the beginning so far) please let me know. I'll PM you.

Thank you!

I'm also willing to look at PS's in return. I'm new to the PS writing game, but I'm pretty decent with grammar and syntax.

hey op! i'd be happy to help you out if you'd like. (fwiw, i've helped a lot of friends with various grad school essays, edited college newspaper, and work at a magazine right now.)

Thanks! PM'ing you.