Academic Statement - 2nd draft - any suggestions?
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 6:29 pm
Removed for editing.
Top Law Schools
Law School Discussion Forums
https://www.top-law-schools.com/forums/
Academic Statement - 2nd draft - any suggestions? Forum
https://www.top-law-schools.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=168033
Page 1 of 1
Re: Academic Statement - 2nd draft - any suggestions?
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 6:32 pm
The first sentence is improper. You can't use a semicolon to connect a list and another sentence. They have to be two independent clauses. That's as far as I got