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by vineyardchick07
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Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 11:49 am
by vineyardchick07
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Re: ROUGH Draft of Personal Statement...PLEASE critique
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:13 pm
by CanadianWolf
Not good. Two sentences on redistricting would be enough. Too much repitition, too little insight. Too many obvious & careless errors. This personal statement may harm your chances for admission to highly selective law schools due to careless errors & lack of insight.
P.S. My impression, ironically, is that you don't have a clue about the true purpose of redistricting.