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May you please critique my Diversity Statement

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 12:29 am
by cutecarmel
Hello TLSers!

I'm looking for someone to give me a bit of honest and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on my diversity statement.
I do ask that you not quote the entire statement, as I will be submiting this soon.

Thanks!

Re: May you please critique my Diversity Statement

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:55 pm
by caminante
Reading your statement made me think that you are a very strong and mature candidate. Good start! :)

Re: May you please critique my Diversity Statement

Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:34 pm
by cutecarmel
Thanks, that helped a lot! I'll work on it