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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 1:41 pm
by beta
GW asks for an optional essay thats only 300 words. my current essay is over by 50....any ideas on whats superfluous? where i could cut?? i really need some help being more concise. please dont quote. thank you SO much.
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Re: please help! need to cut by 50 words!!
Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 1:43 pm
by ph14
beta wrote:
Edited upon request.
I think the best place to cut 50 words is your final paragraph. Take out the first and last sentence and rework the paragraph to cut down on words. Also, the underlined portions don't come off that great. I'd rewrite those parts.
Re: please help! need to cut by 50 words!!
Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 1:47 pm
by beta
would u mind deleting your post ph14?? i'll cut some of those sentences--i just dont want any of my essay to remain on the forum after i take it down.
thanks for your input!
Re: please help! need to cut by 50 words!!
Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 1:48 pm
by ph14
beta wrote:would u mind deleting your post ph14?? i'll cut some of those sentences--i just dont want any of my essay to remain on the forum after i take it down.
thanks for your input!
No problem, good luck.