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Thanks. Removed for editing.
Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:36 pm
by PriOSky
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Re: need help with this one sentence
Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 8:52 pm
by kublaikahn
PriOSky wrote:
Is this sentence grammatically correct? Please don't quote. Thanks!
Who cares if it is grammatically correct. It is terribly written. Stay away from gerunds as the subject of your sentences. And try to say something with each breath that means something, rather than just leading your reader somewhere else.
Also, you only have one ancestry. It may be both Latino and Irish, but it is the only one you have.
Re: need help with this one sentence
Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 8:56 pm
by kaiser
I would scrap this sentence and re-write it
Re: need help with this one sentence
Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 8:57 pm
by Angrygeopolitically
kublaikahn wrote:PriOSky wrote:
Is this sentence grammatically correct? Please don't quote. Thanks!
Who cares if it is grammatically correct. It is terribly written. Stay away from gerunds as the subject of your sentences. And try to say something with each breath that means something, rather than just leading your reader somewhere else.
Also, you only have one ancestry. It may be both Latino and Irish, but it is the only one you have.
+1
Re: need help with this one sentence
Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 8:58 pm
by redsox
kaiser wrote:PriOSky wrote:"..."
Is this sentence grammatically correct? Please don't quote. Thanks!
I would scrap this sentence and re-write it
What part of "please don't quote" did you fail to understand?
Re: need help with this one sentence
Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:00 pm
by kaiser
redsox wrote:kaiser wrote:PriOSky wrote:"..."
Is this sentence grammatically correct? Please don't quote. Thanks!
I would scrap this sentence and re-write it
What part of "please don't quote" did you fail to understand?
the "please don't quote" part
Re: need help with this one sentence
Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:03 pm
by redsox
kaiser wrote:redsox wrote:kaiser wrote:PriOSky wrote:"..."
Is this sentence grammatically correct? Please don't quote. Thanks!
I would scrap this sentence and re-write it
What part of "please don't quote" did you fail to understand?
the "please don't quote" part
