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Personal statement final draftish

Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 4:11 pm
by Moomoo2u
Hi all,

I have a final draft of my personal statement that I'd like some feedback on. I think it's largely finished but it definitely has some problems with phrasing. If anyone would be willing to take a look at it or wants to swap please let me know!

Thanks.