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I've seen some of you guys on here write with excellent grammar and have a strong control of the english language. I was wondering if you could take the time out to critique my Personal Statement grammatically? It is by far my weak point. I don't think my grammar is bad but I'm sure it needs some touching up.

Please PM me and I will send you my PS. Thank you guys so much! You have been instrumental in writing my PS.

Thank you again,
Bigsby

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My first shameless-yet-desperate bump, sorry!!

Bigsby wrote:I've seen some of you guys on here write with excellent grammar and have a strong control of the english language. I was wondering if you could take the time out to critique my Personal Statement grammatically? It is by far my weak point. I don't think my grammar is bad but I'm sure it needs some touching up.

Please PM me and I will send you my PS. Thank you guys so much! You have been instrumental in writing my PS.

Thank you again,
Bigsby

I am not a member of the grammar police and probably wouldn't be the best to check your PS. However, I would suggest reviewing the rules of capitalization because your post and title contain several such errors.

I've seen some of you guys on here write with excellent grammar and have a strong control of the english language (parallelism/agreement error- "write wtih excellent grammar and with a strong control of the English language"). I was wondering if you could take the time out to critique my Personal Statement grammatically(adverb usage error-"the grammatical elements in my PS")? It is by far my weak point (unclear, syntax error-the weak point in your armor? or is it the weak point in your law applications?). I don't think my grammar is bad but I'm sure it needs some touching up.

Please PM me and I will send you my PS. Thank you guys so much! You have been instrumental in writing my PS.

Thank you again,

hahahha thanks Don...

If you'll review mine, I'll review yours. PM me.

Sent!

thank you

If you PM me i'll gladly swap with anyone.

How did I not see this before?! If you're still looking for a grammar police member, I'm available.