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Please critique my PS

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:53 pm
by minnbills
I've managed a 2nd draft of my PS, but I'm worried that it's too cliche. Please send me a PM or post in here and I'll send it over.

Thanks in advance!

Re: Please critique my PS

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:56 pm
by rbarcelo9
I'll take a look if you still want some feedback.

Re: Please critique my PS

Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 5:58 pm
by minnbills
Anyone else? Could use some help.