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PS Second Draft

Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:24 pm
by dean159
Hi,

Is anyone willing to have a look at the second draft of my PS. I still feel really iffy about it so I'm more than happy for it to be torn apart.

Thanks.

Re: PS Second Draft

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:16 am
by rbarcelo9
Ill take a look, TLS helped me so much during my cycle.

Re: PS Second Draft

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:46 am
by dean159
Any other takers?

Re: PS Second Draft

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:57 am
by rbarcelo9
My help wasn't good enough?!?!? Jk (bump)