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PS Swap or general review/comments on a second draft?

Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 1:02 am
by emptyflare
Would appreciate any and all comments on overall impact/impressions, style, grammar, and length. Be as vicious/blunt as desired! :mrgreen:

Am happy with trading or providing for one-sided review, let me know via PM and thanks.