First draft of personal statement - critique?
Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 3:21 pm
Hi everyone,
I'd prefer not to post it publicly but if anyone is interested in looking over a first draft of a personal statement, please let me know! I'll PM it to you.
- It's about a travel experience (to a war zone) and how it impacted my understanding of law/justice and my interest in law school
- It's about my interest in public interest law - so I don't want to come off as too "save the world" but it really IS my true passion so I'm not sure what else to write about. Criticisms welcome.
- I'm happy to swap and read yours in response.
Let me know if you want to have a look! Thanks.
I'd prefer not to post it publicly but if anyone is interested in looking over a first draft of a personal statement, please let me know! I'll PM it to you.
- It's about a travel experience (to a war zone) and how it impacted my understanding of law/justice and my interest in law school
- It's about my interest in public interest law - so I don't want to come off as too "save the world" but it really IS my true passion so I'm not sure what else to write about. Criticisms welcome.
- I'm happy to swap and read yours in response.
Let me know if you want to have a look! Thanks.
