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Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 9:53 am
by Transferthrowaway
Let me know if you've got a spare minute. If so, I'll PM it to you.
Re: Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:00 am
by JordynAsh
I'll take a look.
Re: Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 11:19 pm
by curiouscat
I'd love to take a peek too.
Re: Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 11:54 pm
by witorres89
I'll take at look
Re: Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:08 pm
by Transferthrowaway
Anyone who minds taking a look at draft 2?
Re: Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:12 pm
by Verity
PM me.
Re: Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:12 pm
by CanadianWolf
So long as it's not too long, I'll offer a brief critique if you PM it to me.

Re: Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:15 pm
by Verity
CanadianWolf wrote:So long as it's not too long, I'll offer a brief critique if you PM it to me.

250 is long
Re: Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:13 pm
by CanadianWolf
I think that you missed my attempt at humor. I expected this type of response which is why I added the smile face.
Re: Transfer Yale 250 critique
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:37 pm
by Verity
CanadianWolf wrote:I think that you missed my attempt at humor. I expected this type of response which is why I added the smile face.
i do not the understtand. I am smile