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Would anyone be willing to critique my personal statement? It's about historic preservation, so no dramatic tale of inspiration, but it's who I am. My primary concerns are whether it's boring and/or hokey.

I'm more than happy to review anyone else's PS in exchange. PM me either way.

Sure, I'll take a look at it.

I'd be happy to read your PS if you're still looking for readers. PM it to me.

Sure, I can take a look if you send it to me