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Deleted by author. Thanks everyone!
Posted: Thu May 05, 2011 4:00 pm
by LAWLADI2011
delete
Re: Feedback please!!
Posted: Thu May 05, 2011 4:03 pm
by glitter178
this reads like an SAT vocabulary lesson. I would scrap this and start over, focusing more on one issue rather than throwing out several without developing any of them.
Re: Feedback please!!
Posted: Thu May 05, 2011 4:47 pm
by LAWLADI2011
Can you delete my PS from your comments, please? Thanks. I'd rather not have the old one here.