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Supplemental Essay Critique?

Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 2:53 pm
by greyblob
I decided to apply to UPenn, which requires a supplemental essay. I was wondering if anyone would critique it? It has some personal/private issues I don't want to exactly disclose to the public, but would love it if someone could critique it via PM.

:)

Any takers?