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Need honest critique on my PS

Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:39 pm
by anstone1988
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Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:49 pm
by kublaikahn
It's too short.

Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:59 am
by halostarbucks
Hey, give the guy a break! There are no asinine quotes to start off with, no flatulent pompous verbiage, no harrowing personal story to make the reader cringe and no starry eyed idealism. The essay gets to the point immediately and if you have a 4.0 GPA and a 180 LSAT, I would be ready to let you in!

Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:59 am
by CanadianWolf
OP: I see your point.

Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:01 am
by eaglemuncher
CanadianWolf wrote:OP: I see your point.
winner

Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 1:20 am
by mac35352
CanadianWolf wrote:OP: I see your point.
It had me laughing out loud!!!

Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:55 pm
by Bartlebee06
wordy yet riveting.