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Critique my PS

Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:44 pm
by gracious lurker
forget it

Re: Critique my PS

Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:48 pm
by CanadianWolf
Too brief. Too negative. Punctuation errors (consider capitalizing the "f" & adding a period after "it").

Re: Critique my PS

Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:52 pm
by ladylegale
Umm what the hell? Where is it?