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Thanks for the feedback you all

"presume my interest" -- this makes no sense, maybe you meant resume learning? why not just say continue studying?

"challenges that I have prevailed make "- have overcome?


"helping people find justice." I would take this out, too cliche

There's a lot of grammar issues but that's understandable considering english is your second language, i find it kind of charming actually. As for the narrative, i would talk more about your experiences in the Business Law association and volunteering and what you learned and how far you've come since not even knowing the language.

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