Last time before final grammar corrections
Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:35 pm
Thanks
Really liked it.
You said you realized that your physical goals should not be your priority three times, twice in the last paragraph. At least take out one of those in the last paragraph.
Was Prof. Flynn a former AUSA or a current one? If former, I might just include former in the title.
Good to see I'm not the only one not done with the PS. Mine isn't as good, and still needs some editing, but mind giving it a look?
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