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First draft, be as harsh as you like.
Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2011 12:46 am
by bdole2
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Re: First draft, be as harsh as you like.
Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:20 am
by gothamm
i did not learn very much at all about you. I think i see what you are trying to do here, which is to analogize your experience with that of law school. However, you fail to connect the lessons you learned while on your trip to the challenges/adversities you may face in law school.
Re: First draft, be as harsh as you like.
Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:26 am
by FlanAl
i think it shows quite a bit about who you are and in a way that tells a good story. you're not the kind of guy who panics in a life and death situation. i'm not sure how much the ps has to talk about why you want to go to law school. one of the ones in the anna ivey book doesn't say one thing about law school but it really gives a good idea of the person's character.
Re: First draft, be as harsh as you like.
Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:11 am
by bdole2
bump