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critique needed for Personal Statement

Posted: Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:47 pm
by iamcutdacheck
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Re: critique needed for Personal Statement

Posted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 1:57 am
by jasonc.
HEY! I still dont understand you!
iamcutdacheck wrote:personifying intention
Isnt having an "intention" something innate to a human why would a person need to personify it? i am confused.

The direction your going in doesnt seem to be working,well at least to me.

Re: critique needed for Personal Statement

Posted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 2:21 am
by rockspaperjesus
what..does this mean..