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iamcutdacheck

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critique needed for Personal Statement

Post by iamcutdacheck » Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:47 pm

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Re: critique needed for Personal Statement

Post by jasonc. » Fri Dec 24, 2010 1:57 am

HEY! I still dont understand you!
iamcutdacheck wrote:personifying intention
Isnt having an "intention" something innate to a human why would a person need to personify it? i am confused.

The direction your going in doesnt seem to be working,well at least to me.
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Re: critique needed for Personal Statement

Post by rockspaperjesus » Fri Dec 24, 2010 2:21 am

what..does this mean..
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